Milestones

Fourth Draft Complete

Hey Folks!

My first major writing goal of the year has been met. I wanted to have the fourth draft of my novel completed by 2/21, and I’ve brought it in four days early. I’m currently on winter break so I will likely devote the rest of my time off to putting a dent in draft five. Right now, I think draft five will be the last one. We shall see. If I don’t feel like it’s ready, I sure won’t be rushing to begin the querying process. That said, aside from a few notable things I want to update, I’m not sure continuing to fiddle with the story will add anything of value and I’ve heard that that is when it is time to stop, lest you go on tweaking until the end of time.

I’ve quite enjoyed the revision process. Getting the first draft out was like pulling teeth, but I’ve found loads of joy (okay, the kind of joy that is drizzled with frustration) in figuring out how to make that little story I wrote better. I love challenging and pushing myself.

Stats on draft four:

Word count: 82,000

Time to complete: 48 days

And just for fun… stats from draft 1:

Word count: 71,000

Time to complete: over 364 days

Goals for draft five:

Do not allow word count to exceed 83,000 (awesome if I can find a way to hack it back down to 80,000)

Finish by 4/6

Make it as awesome and polished as I can

 

Happy Writing!

-ED

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Hello… It’s me.

Sorry. I couldn’t resist the lame title, but it has been a while, and I feel like quite the stranger to WordPress. Last time I updated, I had just completed my second draft and now the completion of my third draft has sent me wandering back. Revision has been going well, but I still feel like there is so much to be done. That’s alright though. I plan to keep nurturing this thing until I feel I’ve done the best I can do.  I know I can still make it better and that knowledge is exciting to me. Right now my sweet little WIP is sitting at about 80,000 words – that’s up 10,000 from draft one. I’m not overly concerned by that though. Draft one was seriously lacking some  meat. It needed a little oomph. Now, I might have packed on a bit too much oomph (me and my book… have you guys ever eaten Christmas Crack? my goodness…), but I think my next plan for revision will trim away at some sloppy bits.

I printed out my first and second drafts, but I’ll skip the hard copy of three. I need to, or else I’m going to have a six foot stack of drafts. My plan is to save the draft as a PDF and, between today and tomorrow, just read it. I want to read my book without nitpicking every word (hahaha, right). After that I’m going to create a chapter by chapter outline. I did do that originally, before I ever started trying to throw paragraphs together, but a good bit has changed since then. I want to see a skeleton view of my story as it is now. Hopefully it will easily reveal problem areas and I can start making note of changes to be made for draft four (or rather, start making more notes of changes to be made). I’ve also played around with the Hemingway app and might make a little use of it as I revise.

I hope you all have a happy New Year filled with lots of lovely reading, writing, and dream chasing (and achieving!).

ED

Second Draft Complete!

I completed the second draft of my very first book just a few minutes ago. It feels great, even despite the self-doubt that crept up as I approached this milestone. Once I realized that I was actually committed to my story enough to complete the second draft (I wasn’t so sure during a two month slump after editing the first 70 pages), I started reading up more on writing query letters, finding agents, and how to get your work published. I’m sure many of you know/can imagine how discouraging the information out there can be for a new writer. I took it all with a grain of salt at first though. I figured I would just write the best story I could and hope somebody would fall in love with it when it was done. That sounded just fine until I got about three quarters of the way through the second draft and realized my story would still need some MAJOR work before I could even think about writing a query letter. All these fixable, but numerous, plot issues starting springing up left and right. Just the thought of all the restructuring needed to fix the problems was daunting. Suddenly, all I could focus on is how long it would take me to polish my book, and how much doing so would throw off the lovely little outlining-to-publishing timeline I had in my head (as if I’ve actually stuck to one timeline I’ve made since I started). It took a reminder from a good friend to get me back in the right mindset. All he said was, “The goal should be to make the book as good as you can- not get it sold.” He’s right. I would love to worry about selling this book one day, but I’m not there yet. Right now, I need to put all of my energy into crafting a piece of fiction that I can be proud of. That way, whether I get a shot at sending my baby out into the world or not, I can still feel that sense of success.

It’s been about a year and half since I started this journey. I’m not sure how long this ride will be, but I sure am going to make the most of it.

Next up, draft three! I’ve got a plan for how to approach it… time to execute.

-ED

*My book is an apocalyptic/dystopian/scifi young adult novel currently sitting at about 78,000 words (306 pages)

I wrote a book y’all

I finished the first draft of my first novel about a week and a half ago. I think it’s finally set in… both the fact that I actually finished it, and the fact that I have to do something else with it. I’ve spent a good deal of time working to convince myself that what I’ve created isn’t 100% crap. Now, it may be 99% crap, but I can work with that. The big question is where to begin! This time last year I was digging up information on how to outline and get your story started. This year I have to tackle editing the first draft. Do I start with spelling, grammar, continuity, content? Do I do all of these things at once, or make several passes through? It’s pretty intimidating to look at my near-300 page stack of creative vomit and try to figure out how to polish it into something presentable. All I’ve managed to do is go on a mini office supply shopping spree.

Editing tools!

Okay, that’s not all I’ve done… I’ve also taken all of my bookmarks for landmarks and displayed them in a shadow box. Completing a novel from start to finish was something on my bucket list (more as a challenge to myself, not an arbitrary thing to tick off a list- this writing thing is forever) and I have a habit of not adequately celebrating/acknowledging my accomplishments so I wanted to do something nice. I also like the idea of keeping up with this new tradition for any future novels I may write.

My first draft and all eight bookmarks for landmarks

My first draft and all bookmarks for landmarks

If you have any editing tips, please share them!

-ED

PS. Fun coincidence… today is an exact year since my very first blog post!

Bookmarks for Landmarks! #7

It’s done! I finished my first draft about 30 minutes ago and I am thrilled. 71,343 words. I’ll definitely be back with a longer post soon. I’ve been working on this draft for a full year and what an experience it’s been! I’m so thankful to all my friends, students, and family that have encouraged me along the way.

Here is my final bookmark! I’ll be arranging all of them together sometime soon and celebrating with friends this weekend!

71, 343 words

71, 343 words

-ED

Bookmarks for Landmarks! #6

60,000 words! Hooray! I am absolutely giddy now because the end is truly in sight (well, the end of my my first draft haha). For a while I was worried my first draft would come up a little shorter than I wanted, but now I think I’ll be sitting around a comfortable 70,000 words. It’d be lovely to finish by May because that would mark a full year on this adventure. I rarely ever see out my creative projects start to finish– I have so many unfinished sketches (I’d love to stat drawing again) and stories hanging around, it’s ridiculous. Time to change the trend!

Hopefully my next post will be celebrating my biggest landmark yet!

Until then,

ED

Bookmarks for Landmarks! #5

Yup. Here we are again and I couldn’t be happier. 50,000 words feels really special, and it’s been a long time coming. My story has taken some surprising new turns that have me feeling very positive and excited. I’m really looking forward to the summer when I have endless hours of time to devote to my book… hopefully I’ll be working on draft number two by then!

50,000 words

50,000 words

Happy February and happy writing! -ED

Bookmarks for Landmarks! #4

It took about 3.5 months, but I finally wrote another 10,000 words. I hit the 40,000 mark, which is also around my halfway point, on Thanksgiving morning. I’m not sure if my first draft will get there, but I’m expecting 75,000 to 80,000 words by the end. Now, based on my original timeline, I was to be hitting that milestone by the end of December, but unfortunately, some bumps along the way threw that off… Or maybe it’s not unfortunate at all. Maybe it’s just part of the process. I’m just so pleased to be writing again.

Bookmarks for Landmarks 40,000 words

Bookmarks for Landmarks 40,000 words

Hopefully I’ll be posting about 50,000 sooner rather than later. 😀

ED

Bookmarks for Landmarks! #3

Whoop! It’s a week later than I wanted, but I’ve reached 30,000 words.

My first week back to work was far more busy than I expected. I was bouncing from meeting to meeting, trying to prep for the first week of school and scrambling to finish up my summer classes. By the time I got home each night, I was beat. Writing just wasn’t happening. Naturally, this has made me a little nervous about meeting my goal of 10,000 words per month while working. I’m not going to change anything yet though. As always, we’ll see how it goes first and I’ll rethink my goals only if necessary.

Bookmarks for landmarks

Bookmarks for landmarks

Now it’s time to get ready for work. I’ve got a bunch of 14 year olds to meet in the morning.

-ED

Reading Challenge?

I need to read more.

I love to read, but I don’t do it as much as I’d like or should. I’ve probably read far fewer books than most aspiring authors and writing my first manuscript has definitely exposed a need for me to read more, but not just casually. I need to read attentively, making note of style and pacing.

Since I’ve been all about goals lately, I thought I’d set a reading goal to be accomplished by the end of the year. I’ll be extremely busy (grad school, teaching, coaching, writing) and I’m not sure what a reasonable goal would be, so I may tweak it as time passes. Right now, I’d like to read 10 books by December 31st (counting The Spectacular Now, which I started last week).  As a teacher, this last week and a half of summer, fall break, Thanksgiving break and the first half of Christmas break will surely knock out 5 or 6.

I imagine that most of the books I choose will be popular YA fiction, one because I’m writing a dystopian YA novel and two, because I teach 9th graders and I like keeping up with what they are reading, plus it gives us a good talking point other than biology now and then (even better if the book ties in with biology). I also want to do a few rereads so that I can take a closer look at some old favorites, but I won’t count any of those toward my 10 book goal.

Yay for goal-setting!

-ED

P.S. Something sure felt nice about reaching the 100th page of my manuscript today (25,899 words). 🙂